Rough-Draft-Fixes-

I have written a comparative essay on CP Ellis and Ken Jackson from the Studs Terkel Book and have received feedback from the teacher on the fixes that need to be made. Please make sure that you have actually read the Studs Terkel book or have an actual copy and are able to correct the comments and concerns that are on the top of the page and ON THE SIDE. Furthermore I have attached for you the rubric but your main focus should be the comments on my rough draft that are ON THE SIDE AND TOP OF THE PAGE.