continuing sharpening our critical-thinking skills and enhancing our articulation of what-works-and-what-doesn’t critique of a How the Voice Works/Definition-Description document – how well does the attached document do the following:
-Understands its audience?
-Lets its reader know, from the get-go, what it’s purpose is?
-Are there any “I”/”me” statements that might draw too much attention to a “personal take” on the issue, instead of telling the reader what they need to know, without personal “asides”?
-How successful is the document?
-What could be improved – and why?
-What works – and why?
I look forward to reading your responses.